Misfits of Avalon Writer Notes Chapter 14

Page 177 – 180 Morgan is used to doing stuff alone so that’s probably why she waits for Elsie to leave before checking under Arthur’s helmet. I also wanted to use this chance to give some insight to Arthur’s motives are. But I used the change the world line to tie him and Billy together. Billy is possessed but on

Misfits of Avalon Writer Notes Chapter 13

Page 155 – 160 Here’s the last team meeting at the diner. I wanted to quickly establish that the other girls are aware that Cu is missing. Also Rae is having trouble hearing them. There are a few times where Rae says something that isn’t quite an answer to their question. I wanted her dialog to be slight disjointed from

Misfits of Avalon Writer Notes Chapter 12

Page 137 – 139 I tried to make Rae entering the shed look a little ominous. All these pages I wanted to be slow and quiet as Rae checks everything. This way you can understand why she is confident her plan will work. All the i’s are dotted and t’s are crossed. page 140 – 142 In this entire opening

Misfits of Avalon Writer Notes Chapter 11

Page 117 – 122 I jumped into the scene at the end of Elsie and Morgan’s search because we’ve seen plenty of Elsie and Morgan solo. So I wanted to get straight to when they have a newer interaction. I wanted a close up on Morgan’s eyes when she says she is tired so I could render the bags under

Misfits of Avalon Writer Notes Chapter 10

This quote goes to Kimber because most of this chapter is all her and Rae and it’s all one sided. Poor Kimber. Page 97 – 102 Rae leans in and gets in Kimber’s personal space when ever she asks Kimber for something. When Kimber asks Rae to hang out there is a brief beat. If this were from Rae’s POV